Sunday, September 12, 2010

Saturday Centus week 19

Jenny Matlock


I'm participating in Jenny Matlock's  Saturday Centus, where she gives a weekly themed prompt, and you can use UP to 100 words (not including the prompt) to tell your story. It can be fact or fiction. The only restrictions are: The prompt must be left intact AND you cannot split up the words in the prompt.

I understand that this prompt represents 9/11.  I just don't feel creative when writing about that day, just sad - and my words can't truly convey my feelings.  So, I wrote something else - something different.  Not about 9/11.

I have the prompt in bold.

I stood frozen in front of the flickering images on my TV monitor. The security camera mounted carefully outside the door was a housewarming gift from my father, who worried about my safety in this city known for its crime.

It was so dark, and the noisy static made their pale reflections dance on the paper thin walls of my apartment. I could see them approaching my door, hear their hurried whispers. I could feel the tension in the way they moved, glancing anxiously around the narrow hallway.

I fumbled for my cell, and backed into the shadows of an armoire, eyes glued to the screen.

There was no place to hide.


4 comments:

  1. Jessee, I'm glad you did what you felt with this prompt.

    I shy away from serious stuff sometimes because it is painful or scary..and I actually did that myself this week.

    I think it is just sharing the community of memory that makes this meaningful.

    Your writing is always so evocative.

    It feels like it is coming from a place of truth even though it reads like fiction.

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  2. Jessee - this is actually an excellent post and nice to have it be "different"

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  3. This is a very interesting solution to the challenge. There is nothing that requires us to write about what happened on Manhattan on September 11th, 2001. Your text expresses fear and that is one of the dominating feelings on that day.
    Well done. Very cleverly written. Courageous of you to do something a little different.
    Best wishes,
    Anna
    Anna's SC-Remembering 9/11

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